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On a hot sunny day in California in America there lived an old man he was named old man jenkins because he was famous for eating gherkins but they called him Jenkins. He had a lot of grey hair, Light blue eyes, Chubby hands and little fingers and he had a wonderful smile.
He lived in the city with his son Sam. Sam was 16, he had green eyes, Black spiky hair, bony hands and he was in good shape
Old man Jenkins was a businessman. Old man Jenkins had got interviewed by famous people and they told him that they would pay for him to go on a skydiving experience. Old man Jenkins said “I will have my decision by tomorrow.” So he did.
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On the way when old man Jenkins dashed home he saw his son and his friends.
Sam’s friends were making fun of old man Jenkins cause he was all old and grumpy and always saying that he doesn’t have time for things to do.
He yelled at Sam’s friends and told them to get out!
The son was embarrassed and i mean really embarrassed.
Sam was arguing with his dad and said he was a sissy. Old man Jenkins said “He wasn’t a sissy because he was going on a skydiving experience”
Sam ran out and Sam was really angry, So was old man Jenkins.
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The next morning Jenkins was getting ready to go for the skydiving experience, Old man Jenkins was really scared but he didn’t care because he was angry at his son Sam.
He thought it would be so bad until he jumped on the helicopter!
He then thought to himself was he smart enough to know what to do or no?
He just got ready to go on the helicopter.
Then the helicopter was ready to leave.
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Old man Jenkin’s heart was pounding so much and he didn’t know what to do but it was too late.
Once they were up in the high sky the experienced skydivers told him to jump off the helicopter and told him to push out the parachute when you're nearly down on the ground so you can float.
Old man Jenkins then reached the floor and the parachute was off and he screamed “ I did it, I’m a champion!
He loved it how he felt the wind go through him and how he could see the wonderful baby blue sky just standing there.
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Sam came to pick up his dad from where he got dropped from the helicopter.
Sam found him and then they were on their way home.
Sam still wasn’t talking to his dad in the car he just turned the music loud so he couldn’t hear his father talk.
They arrived home and Sam’s friends were there.
Old man Jenkins just wanted to go to bed. In the back he could hear Sam’s friends telling sam that his dad looks like a big troll.
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Sam had gotten angry and told them to get out in a very loud voice and they ran out really fast out of the house.
Old man Jenkins came out of his room to see what the fuss was all about and he saw that Sam had told his friends to get out.
Then Sam gave his dad a shake on the hand a hug and said “You are the greatest dad in the world”
The dad said to Sam ‘I know I am’
They lived happily ever after in California
By Aeshia Misikea
On a hot sunny day in California in America there lived an old man he was named old man jenkins because he was famous for eating gherkins but they called him Jenkins. He had a lot of grey hair, Light blue eyes, Chubby hands and little fingers and he had a wonderful smile.
He lived in the city with his son Sam. Sam was 16, he had green eyes, Black spiky hair, bony hands and he was in good shape
Old man Jenkins was a businessman. Old man Jenkins had got interviewed by famous people and they told him that they would pay for him to go on a skydiving experience. Old man Jenkins said “I will have my decision by tomorrow.” So he did.
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On the way when old man Jenkins dashed home he saw his son and his friends.
Sam’s friends were making fun of old man Jenkins cause he was all old and grumpy and always saying that he doesn’t have time for things to do.
He yelled at Sam’s friends and told them to get out!
The son was embarrassed and i mean really embarrassed.
Sam was arguing with his dad and said he was a sissy. Old man Jenkins said “He wasn’t a sissy because he was going on a skydiving experience”
Sam ran out and Sam was really angry, So was old man Jenkins.
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The next morning Jenkins was getting ready to go for the skydiving experience, Old man Jenkins was really scared but he didn’t care because he was angry at his son Sam.
He thought it would be so bad until he jumped on the helicopter!
He then thought to himself was he smart enough to know what to do or no?
He just got ready to go on the helicopter.
Then the helicopter was ready to leave.
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Old man Jenkin’s heart was pounding so much and he didn’t know what to do but it was too late.
Once they were up in the high sky the experienced skydivers told him to jump off the helicopter and told him to push out the parachute when you're nearly down on the ground so you can float.
Old man Jenkins then reached the floor and the parachute was off and he screamed “ I did it, I’m a champion!
He loved it how he felt the wind go through him and how he could see the wonderful baby blue sky just standing there.
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Sam came to pick up his dad from where he got dropped from the helicopter.
Sam found him and then they were on their way home.
Sam still wasn’t talking to his dad in the car he just turned the music loud so he couldn’t hear his father talk.
They arrived home and Sam’s friends were there.
Old man Jenkins just wanted to go to bed. In the back he could hear Sam’s friends telling sam that his dad looks like a big troll.
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Sam had gotten angry and told them to get out in a very loud voice and they ran out really fast out of the house.
Old man Jenkins came out of his room to see what the fuss was all about and he saw that Sam had told his friends to get out.
Then Sam gave his dad a shake on the hand a hug and said “You are the greatest dad in the world”
The dad said to Sam ‘I know I am’
They lived happily ever after in California
By Aeshia Misikea
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